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Wednesday, October 15, 2008
My time at Rhegans in the holidays
On the first weekend of the holidays we had my brothers birthday party, it was his 6th birthday but that wasn’t his real birthday his real birthday is the 30th, after his birthday party I we to my friends Rhegan. When I was there we had this really cool thing with paper, where we cut paper into long snakes, well they are not really snakes, we find the middle then got sell a tape and used it to stick the middle up then with the other end we stick on the roof and same with the other end, we did this about 6 times and after that it looks really cool, then I called home asked if I could stay the night, mum said I could, so I did, we went on her laptop and watched scary videos on you tube.
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Hey Chloe sounds like a very cool holiday keep up the good work.
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Chloe, this a great start to your blog page. You are showing great knowledge of how to use this as a networking tool where others can read and give you some feedback about what you are doing and what can be done next... You know need to look at proof reading your writing before you post so that you can address any spelling, grammar and punctuation mistakes before they affect the ability to read your work. Another thing I would like to see before the end of this week (ideally) would be for you to use paragraphs when writing to break up all your great ideas. When starting a new idea leave a gap. Keep up the great work!
Hey Chloe, some of your sentences didn't really make sence because part of it said "I we to Rhegans, and then you done a bit where it sounded like this "then you put the stick in this" but something like that, but apart from that, it was really cool.
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